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LH4874
Thoughtful constructive critique encouraged.

Wardrobe/Hair/Makeup: Bobbi Nevitt [link]

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:iconslamedsilver:
I have downloaded and edited the image with a description of my techniques and details at adjustments for ricmerry by =slamedsilver. I tend to draw as much attention to my models eyes without making it obvious. The only thing I could conceive of with this image is lack of movement. Just a glint of the background peeking through in between her arm and body would have made all the difference in the world. I quickly threw the image into ps3 and went to town on a few minor adjustments but did not take the time to go into great detail making skin tones or lines match perfectly as it is only an illustration.
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:iconathysette:
Very well done. You captured the retro aesthetic perfectly!

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It's the space race babe, and you ain't Russian. :earth:
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Thank you!

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Passionately exploring the visceral relationship between camera & subject.
:iconfrozen-monkey:
uh lala

looks like the 60tes ;)

*to my favs* ;)

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We could close the curtains,pretend like there´s no world
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:iconricmerry:
Thank you!

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Passionately exploring the visceral relationship between camera & subject.
:iconmarkfanboy:
Very sexy, looks just like the cover of one of those old men's magazines from the 1940's or 50's before adding the title and words.
:iconharleyfuelierock:
Great shot! my only criticism is the background. I think it might be better either without the circle -- just a plain (maybe w/ slight gradient) background -- similar to the ones in your other photos would be nice. or have the background more dynamic. then again, what do I know?

EITHER WAY- fantastic shot - well worth a :+fav:

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:orange:Courtney:orange:
:iconricmerry:
Thank you and thanks for your critique. I guess I get tired of my plain old backgrounds and look for some of the simpler things the classic painters did that I can easily replicate.
-Ric

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Passionately exploring the visceral relationship between camera & subject.
:iconricmerry:
Thank you, mission acomplished.
:)

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Passionately exploring the visceral relationship between camera & subject.

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Canon
Canon EOS 5D
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F/10.0
40 mm
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Apr 4, 2009, 12:07:04 PM

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